Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.Write a letter to the

Essay topics:

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter

• explain why you are writing

• describe your circumstances

• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir,

I am Thu Luu, manager of Language Training Department in Thinh Long Labor Export Company. This morning, I read about a new Computing course offered by your College. I am writing you about permission to enrol for this course in same.

As a manager, I have experienced various of language training projects which mostly addressed by computer programs. I often use computer on daily basic and can use expertly number of programs such as Words, Excel, Power Point, etc. In fact, I have not ever taken any official computing course before. I acquired entire of my computer knowledge by myself . Despite the fact that this computer course is only for people got elementary certificate, I am extremely interested in its advantages for my work. I kindly request that whether you can grant me a permission to enrol this course. I am ready to take a mock test if it is necessary.

Please tell me if you need any more information.

I look forward to receiving your response,

Your sincerely

Thu Luu

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ntire of my computer knowledge by myself . Despite the fact that this computer cou...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me if you need any more information. I look forward to receiving your response,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88439306358 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72665871051 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1932022148 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4166666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24428052124 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784497071896 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635967047346 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11553311237 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802352079706 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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