Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
According to some, music is the most convenient method to bring people with diversified background and demographics closer together. In my opinion, I strongly agree that music provide the basis to avoid conflicts and flourishes trade among the countries around the globe.
A good reason to consider is that songs play a positive role in reducing and sometimes eliminating wars between countries. Consequently, it helps foster positive image and foster friendly relations of the country with the neighboring nations as well as other ethnicities all over the world. As a result, this will help in promoting peace and harmony and the world would become a paradise for the humanity. In the past, when artists from Pakistan visited India and performed there, this improved relations between countries and brought the two rivals closer together minimizing the tension between the two countries.
Another point to consider is that music plays a vital role in generating revenue which comes from lives concerts and other musical events. In this era of stress and hectic lifestyle people love to attend musical gathering as it helps them revitalize and rejuvenate themselves. Furthermore, it helps in building a healthy and happy society and lead the country towards a progressive and prosperous nation. For instance; According to a survey conducted by Guardian, 30% of the revenue is generated by the music industry in nations where music is being promoted through live concerts.
In conclusion, music is an effective way of elevating bond between people with a variety of cultural heritage and generations because it improves relations and makes way to a healthy and prosperous society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3595505618 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80578093989 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5489911562 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214776222828 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769573939945 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738549227195 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141951471985 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737299503382 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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