"Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy."
Being a public figure and maintaining a private life is quite difficult now a days because of the social media, paparazzi's and other interviews. If anyone wishes to know about their favorite celebrities, then paparazzi and social media plays a vital role. As over social media, one can easily follow up their favorite celebrities which in a way excites the fans to know more about them. According to me, it is true that today public figures should expect people to be interested in their private lives and I have a few reasons in my favor.
Firstly, public figures like actors, politicians, athletes are someone the public looks up to. Some become role models for a few, while other people want to look like them, or work like them which makes people curious about their personal lives. For example, I had this friend of mine in my high school, whose role model is Mahatma Gandhi. He looks up to all of his books and follows his auto-biography, which itself tells so much about his personal life. I remember the time when he became obsessed with Gandhi and would search for like hours to know more and more about him. He just wanted to live his life on the norms of Mht. Gandhi and quickly accepted the lifestyle. I believe this is one of the best examples of showing how much people really wants to follow up to their favorite public figures. Since, Mht. Gandhi is no more, still people look up to him after so many years and wants to be like, gives a strong reason why it is difficult for a public figure to maintain a private life.
Secondly, when people enter in this kind of business, being in a field where they know they'll be judged by the public, and whatever they'll do, it will be in the eye, it shouldn't be a shock to them to lose their privacy. Take any example, Anushka Sharma and Virat Kohli, Indian Cricket Captain and Indian Actress. The media was way more interested in showing their secret marriage news, which was up for a whole week. Even paparazzi tried to sneak in, for the pictures and details.
Thirdly, I believe one accepts sharing their private lives with the public, but at some point the public figures do have a limit and that is what it should be. One cannot just open up all of his personal issues in front of the public. If someone will try to do that, paparazzi will call it a controversy started by the celebrity for himself. One of the best examples for this is actor Sanjay Dutt. He's a well-known Indian actor, known for his drug addict problems in the early time of his career. He was also charged for keeping a riffle without any warrant, which engendered the news that he was involved in the bomblasts happened at the time. He is one of those public figures who's been criticized his whole life for his public private image and has been involved in many controversies, true or false. If his life wasn't that much open to public, maybe he wouldn't have had to face this much criticism.
I would conclude with the agreement to the statement but also, would agree, if someone wants to keep their lives a bit private, there is no harm in that and public should understand that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ining a private life is quite difficult now a days because of the social media, paparazzis...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
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...ow up to their favorite public figures. Since, Mht. Gandhi is no more, still people l...
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...sneak in, for the pictures and details. Thirdly, I believe one accepts sharing t...
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...ntroversies, true or false. If his life wasnt that much open to public, maybe he woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 565.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53982300885 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29938276354 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481415929204 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7518916088 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6538461538 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7307692308 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235884362294 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602949598183 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722616219003 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134935774856 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409486789934 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.