Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a
foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
position.
learning a second language can create great difference in our social and business life. that is why we see many language schools and language learning advertisements anywhere we look. however, learning another language may not be easy and it mostly depends on the language family where our native tounge belong. Fortunately, learning other tongues in early ages is very easier since kids have no prejudgment and open to receive new information. therefore, I agree with the state of children should start to learn another foreign language the moment when they started to school. My reasons will be explained in this essay.
First and foremost, if we compare the capacity of learning of a child and an adult, we can clearly see that there is a great distinction between them. The main reason of this circumstance is occurred because of the accumulating responsibility and duties in time. An adult do not have the same opportunity to focus and spare time to learn another tongue however, a child have nothing but time and energy so, this creates a significant difference in learning speed and ability. because, there are various tasks and missions that must have accomplished by a grown person. Even teenagers may have troubles to learn languages since they are in the way to get to know theirselves, built a personality and create new relationships with people for their future life.
Some people are in the opinion of not to teach another language in early years but in their older times by going to a language school and so on. I strongly disagree with this notion. because, if a child have the opportunity to do something or learn a language then it should be done right away, otherwise it would be a waste of time and would not be fair for this childs career. if a teen or a young adult go to abroad to work, study or learn language, it would be harder as it can ever be since they have many other thing to consider except learning tounge namely providing for family, earning money, not to lose business contacts and more.
In summary, it would be a perfect gift to learn foreign languages in childhood for a person to have a high life standards in future. therefore, I totally recommend to parents to teach their children another tongues when they started to school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...arning advertisements anywhere we look. however, learning another language may not be e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, therefore, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77664974619 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65394988139 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507614213198 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2943327797 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.705882353 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218969267219 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822621616972 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726614767981 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149585949914 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573321202239 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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