The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.
Recently, the importance of cars and airplanes in modern life has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the negative and positive consequences of it?" Whereas it is a widely held view that the cars and airplanes do not have strong impact on modern life, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the society development standpoint, city planning is bound up inextricably with new road, which indicates it leads to both modern car and new street. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between big city and public car as well as an exponential increase in road safety. Their academic criticism was impressive. consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of urban areas is correlated positively with not only population density but also more facilities.
Within the realm of transportation system, without the slightest doubt, today's communication attribute to saving time, in that it would come down to more speed, less time, and less cost. A salient example of such attribution is jet, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take short distance for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint modern lifestyle problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to traffic jam, civilization, and even rural region. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of new technology in transport systems in big cities.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantageous of cars and airplanes are of more significance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 304.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46381578947 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06654998191 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8129217585 50.4703680194 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.416666667 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195241504653 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495172239337 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910918577727 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120892520422 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123213384421 0.0609392437508 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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