What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Recently, living in an era with constant invention has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the advantages and disadvantages of it?". Whereas it is a widely held view that living there is not beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the technology standpoint, new inventions are bound up inextricably with innovative approach, which indicates they lead to both new research field and experiment. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between modern living environment and technological improvement as well as an exponential increase in better life. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of living standards is correlated positively with not only less pollution but also more convenience.
Within the realm of psychological, without the slightest doubt, mental ability attribute to creative thinking, in that it would come down to less anxious, changing lifestyle, and less stress. A salient example of such attribution is scientific study, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take more adventure for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint underdeveloped countries problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of advanced technology in earth survival.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of living in era with constant new invention outweigh its disadvantages. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Suggestion: , &apos
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78494623656 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26269233767 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670250896057 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.329388422 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285247284281 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802423807611 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12261045233 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17017635137 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121022122821 0.0609392437508 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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