Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Scandals is not always useful, that the reason why it is called scandals not "news". On the one hand, they do make people know something hidden. On the other hand, scandals are not always the information that you should know. Sometimes people just don't need to know.
Scandals are usually someone else's privacy. These kind of information is not everyone else's business so that people don't need to know. In other words, they don't have the right to know. GuanXi Chen, a great actor and singer who have unlimited furture, ruined by the scandals and forced to quit that life forever. The scandals been told that once his computer was dead and called someone to repair it. The worker turns out found a lot of naked woman pictures in his computer. But that's his privacy and that's not a big deal.
Scandals are often useless and unreliable. Nowadays, the media tried everything to catch people's attention to make profit. Consequently, they may use some ridiculous fake scandals because they don't care wheater it is true. Specially the proforming industory all over the world. Once somebody became a super star, their every move will be photoed. Tons of rumers came up in the next morning saying that the husband cheated on his wife if any male super star walked a distant with a woman last night without his wife.
But it has to be admitted that some scandals do have their value and people should know. Chinese proforming insdutory is known for unprofeseonal. In that case, there always have some scandals about sexual asult and illigal makeing profit. Bingbing Fan, a famous Chinese actress have recently been exposed by scandals that she cheated on tax and make a huge amount of money. Police can't figure this out without scandals. So there do have some scandals that people should know because their human right was taken by others subtlely.
All in all, in my opinion, scandals have the same meaning with fake news plus things that not your business and things that you don't have the right to know. But occasionly, scandals are useful to make people know the problems that they don't know.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, as to, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84806629834 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33029511594 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5468030359 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.48 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14138852273 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440821008391 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519360419124 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884484091182 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234035920835 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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