Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?
there has been a momentum grow in transnational business and commercial trading activities between countries in recent years. due to such improvement, a demand in an international language for globalisation’s communication is conceded by the majority, and that accompanied with some advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, it is not easy for the human kind to learn a general language. Like the case of vietnamese for instance, as english now is one of the most famous global language, many vietnamese try to learn english, however, despite many of those successor, some still not. Thus, it may be not insurmountable for everyone to concede a designed globally language.
On the other hand, a general language for the human being to used worldwide is seemingly profitable. if a new international language is invented, people will have to study that language only in order to communicate with others. For example, esperanto can be construed as an international language, and it is widely spoken because of it simplicity. Rather than taking time learning Japanese properly with two different alphabet systems, many people will have their favour in esperanto due to it less complexity. Furthermore, by using a specific language for worldwide communication, it will be fair sufficient for countries around the world as no language of one country is overused than other. Particularly, if everyone using esperanto in conversation, there no such comparation between which foreign languages are most used. Moreover, translation will not be such necessary if anyone learning the same invented international language. Therefore, a designed language will be the most favourable choice.
In conclusion, I deem that the benefits of having an universal language is outweigh it problems. In the future, the transnational business among countries can increase with a calamity rate if there is one general language since the barriers in communication will be eliminated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there has been a momentum grow in transnation...
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Suggestion: Due
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Message: Did you mean 'this successor' or 'those successors'?
Suggestion: this successor; those successors
...learn english, however, despite many of those successor, some still not. Thus, it may be not in...
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Suggestion: If
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...on will not be such necessary if anyone learning the same invented international languag...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...fits of having an universal language is outweigh it problems. In the future, the transna...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47712418301 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33551767466 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0649350284 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207977746881 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745236563282 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522622147831 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113951139106 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439746781859 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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