Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction
times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:EN-US">work has been an integral part of people’s daily life since the ancient times. In the modern society there are too many disputes about the significancy of the payment and your work accomplishment. it seems to me that the salary is the most important thing.
times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:EN-US">The main argument in favour of my idea is that only a good salary allows a person to feel satisfied despite the job he or she has. If an individual earns enough money for his living he will always be able to find other sources of pleasure apart from his work. When one knows that food is bought, the flat is paid and children have a new smart cloths he will be absolutely happy. For instance, young people, who strive to become a doctor, do not often choose this kind of job today as they know it gives little money. that is why one’s well being can be achieved only by the way of big salary.
times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:EN-US">The second argument is that we all are depend on the society’s opinion. In the present the prestige is a crucial thing. Unfortunately, it can be achieved with the help of your finance. I mean that the cloths label, the cost of person’s watch and the place one has dinner are those things people appreciate much more than your moral virtues. For example, one is absolutely satisfied with his work but his wages are not huge, and all the time he feels the pressure of the society that says him he is a looser. Thus first or last your work satisfaction will finish.
times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:EN-US">taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that money always take the first place in your life and cannot be changed by anything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, i mean, kind of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36824324324 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.56258206313 2.80592935109 270% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8148841765 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808913479014 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351240244323 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529095742829 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456494728698 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275916527385 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.