You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of this letter is to give you my suggestions about a financial report that I had left in your hotel.
I think my papers were left on the right bedside table. As my taxi had arrived early in the morning I had to go very quickly so I was in a rush. I am sure they are still being there.
The following information may be of use to you that this report is extremely important for my work because of its valuable financial information. I would also like to draw to your attention that many people depend on these vital papers as these contain details related to their salary and awards; so staff is waiting for it long time.
I would like you to send this report via mail. I would also prefer to pay for it myself. So you will not spend any many just some times. I would appreciate any information you can offer about this issue.
Thank you in advance for you kind cooperation.
Yours Sincerely,
Olga Choklia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... like you to send this report via mail. I would also prefer to pay for it myself....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39548022599 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35787560918 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8543043708 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298040014456 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108683954654 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929555010561 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189936254571 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868414135876 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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