People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every person’s life is the choices he/she made all along. And with all the choices comes the behavior and attitude one has, working in the hindsight. I agree to some extent that a person’s behavior is mostly decided by the factors which aren’t tractable.
Mistakes maketh a man, they say. And the way the humans react to any event is largely influenced by the previous experiences or mistakes one has made over the course of life. And since we as humans are scared beings and tend to learn from our personal encounters and come up with our own behavioral strategy to deal with situations next time. As an example, if a person is demeaned by his colleague in the office then next time he encounters his bully the obvious behavioral reaction of the person would be to either ignore him, or be vindictive, and react rashly.
Not only our personal experiences but also our childhood upbringing has a lot of say in the way we judge situations and act or react so. The morals or principles we grow up to unknowingly become the basis for everything we judge in our lifetime. And hence our behaviors are more or less dependent on that ideology imbibed upon us externally. Just like the big terrorist groups have targeted children at their very tender age with the religion or emotional tools that eventually ends up making them terrorists when they grow up. But at personal levels, these inhuman and nihilistic actions are totally justified in their eyes because they were taught those irrational and extreme theories at first place which became a pedestal to weigh any action they do in their life.
So it’s rightly said that a man can be judged by the company he keeps. The type of company a person lives with has great psychological influence which in turn is visible in the behavioral actions of the person. The company matters to such an extent that when students enter the college after their high school the company they get into either makes or breaks them. There have been many examples in our daily lives where students get into drugs or gangs at the very age they should have made their future.
Additionally, it can be said that although external forces do influence one’s behavior, timely self-introspection can be the tool to keep a check on one’s actions and get better control of one’s conduct. One can choose to keep on reacting or to act wisely to any situation in life. It’s natural to make a mistake and go astray at times but it is a wiser one who realizes it and takes it as an opportunity to become a better person.
Conclusively, one can say that the external forces are a guide to behavioral aspects of an individual but self-criticism and right judgment are helpful to counter any negative external factors in play.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'choices'' or 'choice's'?
Suggestion: choices'; choice's
...he/she made all along. And with all the choices comes the behavior and attitude one has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2305.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78215767635 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70454206599 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52489626556 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5170919627 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962120331571 0.243740707755 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031674011015 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312431695041 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540306762685 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216342137105 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.