plastic shopping bags contribute the pollution of land and sea, some think
they should be banned.
Do you agree and disagree.
Plastic bags are used everywhere in our daily life. Be it shopping at a nearby convenience store or large mall, plastic bags are used to everywhere.However, disposal of these bags is become huge cause of concern for many countries.Whether administrators should forbid the use the product? this conundrum is discussed in this essay in greater detail.
Usually, after use, plastics bags are disposed of in the garbage bin and waste authorities either dump these plastic bags into landfills to disintegrate over years causing harm to wildlife, wildlife habitat and humans.Alternatively, these bags are thrown into the water bodies, which endangers marine life and causes their early death. many ocean enthusiasts in South east Asia, when they snorkel or dive into the sea, find plastic debris instead of exotic aquatic animals.Furthermore, not only our oceans are polluted with this dump, our river are also clogged up with this waste. many rivers carry the trash over the distance making river water undrinkable.The Yangtze, the world’s third-longest river, is the largest contributing catchment, dumping some 330,000 tonnes of plastic into the east China sea. this kills over millions of sea mammals, birds and fishes and the adjoining ecosystem on the land.
One may counter the above argument, supporting use of plastic. many shops charge customers for using plastic bags while shopping, ban on plastic bag could disrupt income sources for businesses. Also, many shoppers use them as bin liners to dispose their daily waste.A complete ban on usage of plastic bags could result in exploiting other resources to substitute plastic such as cotton bags. this could, in turn lead to mass scale production of cotton by farmers and so, excessive use of fertilisers to grow the cotton, which could pollute water bodies with excessive chemicals, seaweeds, which so kill ocean life and human life.
Based on the aforesaid discussion, anything in excess is not good. resources on earth are limited and considering both pros and cons, consumers should be mindful using plastic bags.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, third, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5910844874 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622023809524 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0803232933 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0526315789 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212566617856 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652374080973 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521805869922 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127982718895 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251893423421 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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