Plastic having unique properties, are widely used, to make shopping bags and containers. Some people are of the opinion that use of plastic bags and container should be completely restricted, as they are the major contributor in polluting the environment.However, in my opinion, banning plastic bag is not a solution but by proper disposing off the plastic waste will prevent environmental damage due to plastic.
In recent times, plastic are used to make numerous daily products. Plastic were introduces as a substitute for wood, glass and certain metals. Plastic bags are not only attractive and cheap, as compared to cloth bags but also durable and waterproof as compared to paper bags. These unique properties of plastic made it to be widely used as shopping bags.
Plastic, has numerous advantage. However, it's one major disadvantage is it is non bio-degradable. In other word, plastic product do not decompose with time. This has resulted in plastic being a major contributor in damaging the environment.For example, plastic when dumped in the ocean not only affect the beauty of the ocean but also has adverse effect on marine life. These marine animals accidentally consume pieces of plastic which causes indigestion , resulting in death of the species. Similarly, on land when plastic is not properly dumped, the innocent animals swallow the plastic bag. Thus result in death of the animals due to choking. Therefore, care must be taken to dispose off plastic so that it should not create damage to animals and nature.
I am thus of the opinion that plastic bags being the main culprit for ecological damage. However, by completely restricting it use will not solve the problem of global warming, as plastic was being introduced as a substitute of wood. Now will a ban on plastic people will turn to paper as a substitute. This will result in numerous trees getting cut down affecting the environment. Plastic needs to be therefore properly disposed without affecting the environment.For example, country like Singapore burns plastic in an incinerator and produces electricity. Therefore, by just banning the use of plastic is not the solution to the problem but by creating dumping ground for plastic and creating awareness among people the effects curbed.
In conclusion, plastic has numerous advantage and by completely restricting the use of plastic will result in other material being utilized on large scale. So according to me, the best option is to definitely minimize the use of plastic and through proper disposing the plastic waste the environment can be safe.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.Why do you think that is the case?What is the most important thing to succeed in life. 84
- plastic shopping bags contribute the pollution of land and sea, some thinkthey should be banned.Do you agree and disagree. 73
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? (IELTS Academ 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22009569378 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91712393355 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480861244019 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7514797687 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1818181818 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24478569686 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835690691711 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540865236421 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164152814355 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046408359074 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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