Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy through sporting events such as Olympics or World Cup. Others think that there are more better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and state you opinion.
Sporting is the age of young people to escape from a monotonous life as well as to become obese free. It could happen due to the advancement in techniques of sports. Young generation is most allured with world championship's, wrestling and worldwide games to meet overall development of the body. However, other hold the opposite views. According to me, it depends upon the individual preferences of the clients to make it through recognition or in simple ways. We shall look into booth the views before forming an opinion.
Elucidating in details, the multifarious benefits of performing in Worldwide competitions are fame, success , money , physical and moral development of the body. Likewise, sports people develop the qualities of ethics, team spirit, anger control. Hence, this is the most convenient and fastest method to enthusiast any person to divulge in the game competitions globally. Furthermore, these competitions demands strenuous exercises with day and night hard work and all time practice. Consequently, it imposes younger one to devote time paying and practicing regularly which directly leads to movements in the body. Subsequently, this will give body flexibility, strength, endurance and always make body rejuvenated. Lastly, it is apt saying that, killing two birds with one stone at once. Aggregately, adult generation will both can grab worldwide recognition at the same time with performing a dynamic activity for the body.
On the other hand, perhaps the thought of acknowledgement of sports to the people through recreational activities, swimming session, hiking on the mountains, playing indoor games, walking and so on, are the best prescribed as the simplest ways to number of people choices. Besides, it could be nightmare for the low earning as well sole bread earner of the family to be part of such grand finale world cups. Most of the people presumes cycling, a brisk walk after dinner and other ways such as yoga , aerobic classes are better uncoupled methods for doing exercises. Additionally, adults mostly addicted towards gym workouts to make themselves strongly fit.
To pen down, apart from the many benefits of international games to become renowned, reasonable earning with physical development in contrast to the reliable methods of exercise simply by sweat workouts and leisure games are the ways which are dependent on the preference of the human nature and their need of choices.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-10 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 85 | view |
- A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures.Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk aboutExplain why would the 84
- The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not work 89
- The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?Do you think the advantages outweigh the di 78
- It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public What would be the best solution to keep them open in your opinion 93
- Nowadays shopping has become a new favourite pastime for young people. What are the reasons for this? Should they be encouraged to develop other hobbies? How? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...However, other hold the opposite views. According to me, it depends upon the individual prefere...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Worldwide competitions are fame, success , money , physical and moral development ...
^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e competitions are fame, success , money , physical and moral development of the b...
^^
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...game competitions globally. Furthermore, these competitions demands strenuous exe...
^^
Line 9, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...after dinner and other ways such as yoga , aerobic classes are better uncoupled me...
^^
Line 13, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rast to the reliable methods of exercise simply by sweat workouts and leisure gam...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, likewise, look, so, thus, well, apart from, as to, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34025974026 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91514328425 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607792207792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5840023045 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.210526316 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57894736842 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161572310221 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404707685988 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423278598412 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885606891291 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668752072887 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.