The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over 4 different seasons.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over 4 different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart compares points scored by three different teams in four different seasons for the years 2002 to 2005.

Overall,team B remained the most successful over the given period ,despite their decrease in score.team C and team A had significant changes over the years.

For the year 2002,team A scored 5 points and team C scored double of team A at 10 points while team B were the highest at 82 points.Whereas in 2003, the points increased for team A by almost double at 11 and by one half for team C at 15 points.team B were at 60 ,the highest of all teams.

Moreover,for year 2004 there the team A points increased by three folds at 35 points making it relatively closer to team B at 45 points .team c points decreased by 3.While,in year 2005 both team A and C scored lowest with 8 and 5 points respectively.team B remained highest at a score of 55 points with an increase of 7 points when compared to year 2004.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...le team B were the highest at 82 points.Whereas in 2003, the points increased for team ...
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...uble at 11 and by one half for team C at 15 points.team B were at 60 ,the highest...
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...r team C at 15 points.team B were at 60 ,the highest of all teams. Moreov...
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...e highest of all teams. Moreover,for year 2004 there the team A points incre...
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Line 19, column 39, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
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Suggestion: A point; Points
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...relatively closer to team B at 45 points .team c points decreased by 3.While,in ye...
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...45 points .team c points decreased by 3.While,in year 2005 both team A and C scored l...
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... highest at a score of 55 points with an increase of 7 points when compared to ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52046783626 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8382521471 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2120748673 43.030603864 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.25 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.75 22.9334400587 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199706252626 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151920891903 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253718269747 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151920891903 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253718269747 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.2329268293 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.15 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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