Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Over the years, every field has evolved because of the technology, which purpose is to make our lives easier in other words. In this essay i will discuss my conception about this topic and it will include my ideas and experiences.
Firstly, food is a source of energy, without, we will eventually die. In order to live, we have to maintain a balanced life, healthy eating, stay hidrated, exercise more, take care of the environement around you, shop from local markets. In my opinion an easy cooked meal saves time, example: by having a piece of fruit or a vagetable, easy to cook not only keeps you healthy but also reduce cooking time. To give you an illustration our body is like a machine, and like any other one needs a source of energy, so we need to stay charged in order to function, so food is our fuel. However, some of us can misunderstand an easy meal with a snack. It is not healthy by eating random snacks at different hours, in this way you can disturb your nourishment program and you will easily get unfit. To prevent all these issues about nutrition, you can make your own nutritional program, it might contain you favorite meals.
Secondly, like any other fuel food is a cost that can become very expensive a times example: to purchase ready meals and eat out from my previous experience during highschool it cost me more than preparing myself at home. However in my own mind then i thought i was saving time and free myself for studying more but instead was so easy and tempting to purchases unhealthy snacks therefore unbalanced diet which made me feel unwell and not so fit for my training, so i had to change the way i was thinking by buying fruit and vegetables instead easy to cook.
Generally all the supermarkets are selling healthy meals curently this encourege most of us to buy a ready meal and use the spare time to socialise instead.
Above all, preparing your own food instead of buying it from various supermarkets not only saves money but you are also living a healthy lifestyle, like that you will kill two birds with one stone. Nutrition it is important and you have to take care of what you eat and when in my case routine is everything. By cooking your own meal you use your favorite ingredients and flavours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63950617284 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50258820452 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535802469136 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2162678722 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.266666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163373095391 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598519995073 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553219815437 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916360726702 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336506834484 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.