Does video communication with doctor help patients to core any disease? pros& cons?
The importance of video communication with doctor help patients to which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion . The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational .this essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that patient’s is in emergency doctor communication help video call .Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that pain is essay medicine is good needless to say all these merits stands in a good stead .
However ,there are same pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that patients meet doctor take medicine . Besides doctor video call is no good treatment .Hence it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of doctor to meet take medicine are instrumental indeed .Nevertheless tis potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2850678733 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.841540184 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58371040724 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4079970369 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.857142857 104.977214359 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.9669160288 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151652725853 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749546019804 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768334510032 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919336176153 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381148822495 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 12.6369458128 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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