You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
• explain the situation
• describe why it bothers you
• suggest a solution
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Mrs. Methew,
I am writing this letter to highlight a problem of noise coming from the apartment upstairs. It has become unbearable now, and I hope that it can be stopped.
Mr.John, who has recently moved in, is very much fond of loud music. He does not only play music in high volume during day time but also at night. I requested him to slow down the volume several times, but he does not pay heed to my requests. It feels as if the music is playing beside my ears which has caused me headache all the time.
In this situation, I find it hard to concentrate on my work since I work from home. Last week, I could not complete my assignment on time because I was not feeling well due to inadequate sleep at night. It is crucial for me to get sound sleep at night so that I could carry out my work as per schedule.
In order to eradicate the issue, I request you to ask Mr. John to use headphones while listening to music in loud volume. It would not make a noise to me, and he can enjoy music as well. I hope that you would agree to my suggestion.
I look forward to taking a peaceful sleep tonight.
Yours sincerely,
Hima Jony.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch has caused me headache all the time. In this situation, I find it hard to con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30454545455 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3104863357 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8282698545 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6428571429 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823675920789 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273808016988 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327248806533 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0402267251483 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036891499547 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.