Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There have been a vast number of scholars all through the history of human beings and many of them were popular for broad domain of their knowledge in various subjects such as mathematics, astronomy, music and so on. In addition to, some of them were also famous because of their specific skills. Nowadays, many people are staunch adhere of the notion that is about knowing different academics areas, but some other believe that they should be professional just in one area. As far as I am concern, being competent in one academic area is much better than having broad knowledge in different area for two main reasons. The ensuing paragraphs will elucidate the rationale behind my statement.
To commence with, all of the well-knowing scientists who had broad knowledge in various fields are famous for one their areas. Although they were able to understand different parts in different sciences, their dominant area was also determined. For instance, Hakim Omar Khayyam was a popular Iranian mathematician, astronomer and poet, but his most famous are of research was math.
Another significant reason that deserves attention is about the proficiency of a scholar in an area. You may know about many various subject but you may not be able to do anything special to enhance the level of that field, or maybe you cannot even able to answer a critical question in that area. A very good example that can shed light on about what was explored above is one my professors, he is teaching so many courses in university such as, thermodynamics, fluid mechanics, computer programming but any time you ask a question, he is not able to respond your question.
All the above factor taken into consideration, having especial knowledge or profession not only cause a high level of understanding but also it can help to solve different problems of that area. Therefore, If anyone ask me to choose, I will definitely choose to be a professional person in just one specific area in order to be more effective and productive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79547335532 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579411764706 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8578076419 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227797703794 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703971879393 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515856061052 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120034495384 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608511279319 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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