You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
• Give details of your visit to the restaurant
• Explain the reason for the celebration
• Say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding to notify of your restaurant's excellent service and foods.
Last night my friends and I went to one of sub restaurant of chi Yummy which is allocated on Spring Road. we celebrated one of our friend's birthday and we were delighted with our experience there. The stuff were so friendly and welcoming and the overall quality of service was fantastic. our order which includes seafood,steak and some vegetables arrived quickly, were hot, of good sizes and inexpensive. In addition the drinks were reasonably priced. we were particularly impressed that the stuff came with a birthday cake and played the birthday song for our friend and made her thrilled about her party.
I hope that your restaurant will thrive and I am appreciated about what have been done to my friend I hope this letter be a way that your stuff will been awarded.
Your Sincerely,
chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ummy which is allocated on Spring Road. we celebrated one of our friends birthday ...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...erall quality of service was fantastic. our order which includes seafood,steak and ...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , steak
...tastic. our order which includes seafood,steak and some vegetables arrived quickly, we...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... hot, of good sizes and inexpensive. In addition the drinks were reasonably priced. we w...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...tion the drinks were reasonably priced. we were particularly impressed that the st...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ope that your restaurant will thrive and I am appreciated about what have been do...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'will be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: will be; has been
...pe this letter be a way that your stuff will been awarded. Your Sincerely, chi Chung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85350318471 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67900845305 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7810282423 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238023064679 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873495740141 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492844877048 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166260535082 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346246442282 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.