Most of people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial.To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?
In the modern era of Millennium, a majority of community agrees with the notion, which indicates that we are living in globalised world. Although each of them does not support that this advancement is beneficial. I partially agree with this statement and put both pros and cons of globalisation on human being and environment before making final statement.
To begin with the positive impacts of globalisation on human being, the predominant one is, it mental the barrier among the different civilization of the world. Because of these people from different countries or different communities get a chance to be familiar and get exposure towards the various rituals and cultures of many nations and their citizens. Recent survey by department of Homeland security of United States demonstrated, that immigrants from distance Nations came to to us for employment have adapted the the American culture.
As every coin has a flip side there is a heinous dark Side of globalisation that is global warming. This side effect of modernization has become headache for each and every nation of the world. Because of globalisation communities of to use modern gadgets and equipments which spoils nature and environment. WHO reported that 95% of vehicles and 70% of factories in India emit harmful gases like carbon monoxide and sulphur dioxide causing the risk of increase in global temperature by 0.5 degree celsius per decade.
In conclusion, I Reiterate my views that globalisation comes with plethora of advantages which are essential for today's world. However the negative impacts on environment are not concealed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32295719844 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97758180897 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3623528441 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220747779737 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771097385692 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572072297899 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127743380214 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644287511534 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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