You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:
• explain what you need
• say when you plan to be there
• ask for information about prices
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________
Dear Mr. Mathew,
I am writing this letter to inquire about accommodation choices for holidays. I along with my family will stay in Singapore for one week. It would be nice to have an apartment nearby the beach.
My family, including two sons and wife, is really fond of beaches and water sports so we would prefer to rent an apartment nearby sea-shore. In addition to the location, a small size apartment decently furnished and well-ventilated is required which must have windows facing the beach. We are planning to arrive there on June 6 and will stay till June 12, 2019. We intend to spend this one week by fully enjoying our stay.
I would like to get a list of available apartments as mentioned above along with their rent prices as it would aid me to decide the most suitable one. I will appreciate if you could send me the list before June 1st on my email address given below.
I look forward to seeing your response in regarding my inquiry.
Yours sincerely,
John Paul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t on my email address given below. I look forward to seeing your response in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, regarding, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70454545455 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52014097566 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693181818182 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1012671266 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2727272727 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11538820767 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395522035572 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277199750446 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633474272471 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358391286049 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.