In towns and cities
Shopping and purchasing style of the people has changed in the last few decades. Shopping centres substitutes the local markets in the urban area. I believe that the shopping centres and local markets have their own benefits and drawbacks. This essay deals with the impacts of shopping centers and local markets in people's life along with my opinion.
First of all, shopping malls became center of attraction to people. Now people buy and buy things from shopping malls to show their living standards. Secondly, people can buy everything of the best quality from shopping mall. However, because of the best quality of products shopping is expensive in these shopping centers. It's hard to buy expensive products for middle or lower class people. Finally, in shopping malls gaming clubs and fun zones attract the people of all ages. For example:- DLF MALL has an India the biggest gaming park.
On the other hand, Small shops in nearby markets fulfill the daily need of people's, because people cannot go to shopping malls every time for little things. Moreover, these local shops offer a variety of products from low quality to high quality. Apart from that, few local shops gives a home delivery service of products. Furthermore, these local shops save time and energy of people. Because People buy things while returning from office or work.
To put it in nutshell I pen down saying that attraction of shopping malls cannot affect the<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="affect "></span> local small shops.
- It has become easier and become affordable for people to travel other countries. Do you think it is positive and negative development? 56
- Some people believe government should spend Money on New building rather than renovation old building. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- In towns and cities, large shopping malls replace the small local shops. 62
- Shopping malls and local shops 78
- In towns and cities 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, while, apart from, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23577235772 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13726606513 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8808270718 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7647058824 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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