Nowadays, some parents pressure their children to be successful in a specific field. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
it is true that children are doing pressurized by their parents to pursue specific professions So that can become successful in life. it seems that the role of technology in employment is the reason behind it. according to me, It will have positive implications on children.
the main reason behind this is technological advancement which not only has led to the extinction of traditional jobs but also given birth to many new professions. study at Harvard University has shown that because of artificial intelligence by the end of 2020, around one million traditional manufacturing jobs are likely to be destroyed. while traditional careers high school education and average skills, modern day jobs demand higher education and professional skills. keeping this in mind, parents tend to enforce children to pursue specific fields or careers so that they can become successful in their life.
this development may have positive implications on children. because of transition of job market many children will be encouraged to go to college or University education to get the knowledge and skills which are essential to fulfill the requirements of modern day job market. while it will improve the country's economy, in fact the over overall literacy rate will be improved. moreover, these noble pursuits are highly paid and will make an individual successful in their life.
in conclusion, as the technology is growing rapidly, I think it is not bad to pressurize children to pursue specific professions keeping in mind the future of employment. undoubtedly, it can make them successful in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31640625 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01035809487 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7523630136 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278800224701 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102643180734 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826010380252 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176739535508 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044948011527 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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