Discuss the importance of children receiving parents’ education.
The importance of children receiving parents education. Which was highly deptable has now become more contiversial. The substantial influence of this receiving parents education has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on when the parents are education then the children are also educated. Over the recent years it can have some negative impacts and some possitive impacts. In the essay have some positive impacts like some parents of the childrens are not educated. When the children give the study to their parents when the parents learn more. But some parents which are not educated that is also not good because they cannot give the good study for their childrens. Because when they cannot provide good education then the source of the income is also not good. When the income is not good then the parents cannot study their children in good schools. Because in private school the fee is very high. The parents cannot affort it. The educate parents childrens are also educated because the income source is good then the students can study good and they got good jobs. The education is also neccessary for every parents because when the every parents is educate then the children is also educate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f children receiving parents education. Which was highly deptable has now become more...
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Suggestion:
...le has now become more contiversial. The substantial influence of this receiving ...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ents of the childrens are not educated. When the children give the study to their pa...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ive the good study for their childrens. Because when they cannot provide good education...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... source of the income is also not good. When the income is not good then the parents...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents cannot study their children in good schools. Because in private school the f...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... study their children in good schools. Because in private school the fee is very high....
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ery high. The parents cannot affort it. The educate parents childrens are also educated bec...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... can study good and they got good jobs. The education is also neccessary for every ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'educated'.
Suggestion: educated
...rents because when the every parents is educate then the children is also educate.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'educated'.
Suggestion: educated
...ts is educate then the children is also educate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 31.9359605911 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98536585366 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30900263292 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 139.433497537 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409756097561 0.580463131201 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.70638993 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6153846154 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 7.25397266985 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234791946788 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132850633767 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188821550635 0.071462118173 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234791946788 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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