Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?
There is a school of thought that teachers and parents throughout the world should include the educational activities to the free time of youngsters. Nevertheless, its impact on their growing life of child brings much controversial debate. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative sides of those kinds of teaching from a cultural perspective.
Providing the activity of education for children is undisputedly one of the main type of giving the good things for themselves when they have lots of free time during their daily life. The first reason to support it is that a great deal of educational environments on Earth nowadays are trying to change the old of this which have only brought knowledge on a regular basis, to a new one including the opportunities of learning by taking the unuseful time to face these knowledges in the realistic ways. To illustrate, we can see from many universities and high schools in Australia, a country which is infamous for educating children, are growing very fast with a special studying kind for youngsters based on the advantage ways to deal with much unuseful time of them. It stands to the reason that educational elements of free-time activity should be available for offspring based on the positive sides of aforementioned argument.
On the other hand, people should also get some imagination of the disadvantage sides when we brought those kinds of activity for them in their spare time. Actually, the advantage things was probably taking some negative phenomenon in every aspect. For instance, giving a great deal of activities with regard to education for youngsters would make their brain to be maximum to acknowledge the true of these meanings and they would not have the time to relax and gain energy for the next class. Therefore, if we would prefer the child to afford this kind of acts, we should plan the accordant daily time for them to get the best way to deal with it.
In a nutshell, it seems to me that although the mission to improve the waste time of offspring is greatly important, the relaxing time in youngster's spare time could also value considerably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96388888889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7850446613 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3895804241 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.916666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280530486886 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111438989911 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067586757044 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178492767496 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195407154857 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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