Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree?
Throughout the history of mankind, it is true that many people around the world had different views in term of the role of up-to-date fashion style. In my opinion, while I agree that people should select the dresses with regard to the comfortable feeling when they wear it, but it also cannot deny that the impacts of modern fashion on every aspect of life bring many extra points.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that people should wear costumes which are in accordance with their own interest. It stands to the obvious reason that everyone has their own personal taste in fashion’s trend, as some of them like loose clothing since they were more enjoyable to wear. However, there are some sections of society who prefer to wear tight clothes instead of its cozy because of the idea indicating that it could make them feel more young and energetic. Moreover, the trends of fashion are undisputedly dynamic and change rapidly in just a few months, constituting the harm to their money’s budget so that it is consumptive to follow the latest style even if they could afford but it cannot be verified that they must not buy clothes more often.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that showing the modern fashion style has some advantages for the individuals. The first reason to support it is that by wearing the latest style, some people feel more confident in their business. To illustrate, we can see clearly that every sales manager around the world might meet many potential clients, and they must have a great confidence in convincing their customer and one of the ways would be the stylish dress which they wear in the meeting. Furthermore, there are some fact that certain people are appraising the worth of someone with regard to their physical appearance and performance. For example, should there be two potential candidates in a job interview, both have nice personalities, good technical skill and a wide range of knowledge, but one of the candidates wears frumpy and old-fashioned clothes, while the other show the modest costumes. For this instance, the later candidate might have the higher probabilities of being selected by employer.
In conclusion, while the idea of wearing clothes based on human’s own preference is undisputedly true, I still believe that people should also follow the latest style of fashion since it quietly affects our own performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97014925373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66962133037 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7216071223 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.692307692 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9230769231 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217069689228 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073060939708 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387305302701 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130894837089 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166486469692 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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