Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that we have a sedentary lifestyle. To what extent do you agree?
The ancestors of us, who lived in yesteryears had an urge to build a strong sturdy physique to confront the challenges before them to enjoy a life of fulfilment, devoid of serious ailments.Compared to those days people who live today seeking pleasures in the state-of-the-art technologies have become the slaves of them and lead a sedentary lifestyle inviting various fatal diseases.
The mesmerizing momentum that technologies brought about on societies, in many ways facilitated people to execute their day-to-day activities without much physical exertion. The magnetism of involving in virtual games and other indoor indulgences, further, has implicitly exacerbated the otherwise existed social cohesion in communities shattering the very social fabric. Luxurious life, nevertheless, without the synergy with fellow-beings naturally will deteriorate the well-being and mental status of masses becoming the victims of depression and discord.
Moreover, seldom people visit the organisations, these days, where they need to negotiate all the important transactions, thereby creating a vacuum in building and renewing relationships on a daily basis.The past society who lived ahead of us; however, was stubborn in structuring social solidarity with their steadfast spirit of establishing fraternity. It is all these virtuous deeds, obviously, would bring ultimately the desired peace and harmony among community and it is the panacea for people to be robust in life.
Thus, it is apparent that when citizens embrace on luxury at the cost of being physically inactive, they may have to withstand various medical problems. Realising the devastating comfort that technologies offer, to a certain extent its beneficiaries can lead a life sans sedentary lifestyle barring ailments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79087452471 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21707159599 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684410646388 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.7319866024 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.375 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0907686286395 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358401555844 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261494398176 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536231991715 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024722246508 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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