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The importance of in recent years,people in finance,film actors and company leaders are getting more pay.Which was highly debatable and more controversial,The substantial influence of this in recent years,people in finance,film actors and company leaders are getting more pay has sparked the controversy trend on the leaders and film company gain so many money because film director gain so many money when the film is flop then the film director cannot give more money over the recent years. it can be agreed that the it has some negative impacts and soma are positive impacts this essay will discuss both of the aspect and lead to a conclusion. At the outlast,there are some positive impacts in this topic,but one of the most concipicious one stems from the that another preponderant one is that when the poor people finance something they cannot gain more profit because the leaders cn gain money.As a example,when normal person take a finance they cannot gain in this finance because the leaders can gain more so this topic plays a vital values on this topic. From what has been discussed above,it can be conclude that the impact of in recent years,people in finance,film actors and company leaders are getting more pay are prominent,although there are numbers of people.Those should not be overlooked
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08837209302 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94192572774 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 139.433497537 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474418604651 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.5024630542 259% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.915714429 50.4703680194 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.5 104.977214359 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.75 20.9669160288 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.33497536946 450% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319420854262 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184421040795 0.0925447433944 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149905384813 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319420854262 0.151781067708 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 12.6369458128 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 53.1260098522 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.9458128079 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.3980295567 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.5123152709 228% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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