The graph shows the changes in the spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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The graph shows the changes in the spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt; line-height:107%">The pie charts indicate the alteration of the uk in spending money on different habits for 30 years from 1971 to 2001.

14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt; line-height:107%">In general, there was a dramatic difference between the proportion of cars and food while the rest of the parts slightly changed.

14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt; line-height:107%">In detail, food and cars still comprised more than half the budget of uk people. cars accounted for over one-fifth in spending in 1971 and a double increase to 43 % in 2001. Much of the increase in th cars can be explained by the decrease in the food section, it fell by 30% in 2001, which is two-third of the figures in 1971 ( 14% ).

14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt; line-height:107%">On the other hand, other areas also changed moderately. The percentage of petrol and furniture showed a similar pattern of a slight reduction, dropped by 2% and 1% respectively. In terms of the restaurant, the people in the uk spent money doubly, up from 7% in 1971 to 14% in 2001. The proportion gap was particularly large in the computer, which was six times in 2001 compared to the figure in 1971.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...est of the parts slightly changed. 14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt; line-hei...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cars
...more than half the budget of uk people. cars accounted for over one-fifth in spendin...
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Line 9, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich is two-third of the figures in 1971 14% . 14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11....
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Line 9, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...is two-third of the figures in 1971 14% . 14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt; ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, third, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71195652174 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.85944801136 2.65546596893 221% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3159920492 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.777777778 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143727198228 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747771552858 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513658682407 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991246341975 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463547443657 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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