The graph below shows the percentage of self employed workers of the total workforce in five countries in 1998 and 2008. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the information about the terms of percentage of workers who did self employment of the total workforce in five various nations ( Russia Republic, Slovakia, Czech Republic, Greece and Turkey ) which is in twenty years from 1998 to 2008.
In overall, Turkey constituted a major for self employed workers since Russian Republic leased for self employment of total workforce . However, a significant change can be seen in all countries’s proportion over the periods.
It can be seen from the information that Turkey was most popular in workers who gave preference to did self work in given years which accounted at over a fifth during 1998 and drastically fall above 20% and reached at approximately 40% in 2008 followed by Greece. In addition to this, between two decades the percentage of self employed workers were found at 42% and 34% respectively in Greece.
The graph further proves that Russian Republic attained a least figure for workers who did self employment and noticed at a tiny proportion in given times. Furthermore, workers who preferred to self employment can be observed at 8% in 1988 in Slovakia where it raised at over one in ten into 2008. Lastly, the percentage of Czech Republic self employed remained relatively similar and difference of 2% can be noticed at 13% in 2008 and 11% during 1998.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03587443946 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84717849505 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533632286996 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6346250096 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.375 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272838743656 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131906616169 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626580230978 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185119217807 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448386369697 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.