People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
There are several problems in our societies and country which is to be looked up by the people choices and they tries their best to end it because the countrymen chose them to do so, but sometimes they find an easier way to do so by exercising their power as a lawmaker and by making laws which are highly punishable if someone doesn't follow it. Therefore, people should question the rules of authority and should not accept it passively because if the rule is not up to mark it is innocuous for the people.
The rules created by officials that is a member of parliament is sometimes not up to the mark in every aspect and need some amendments to it, for the rules implemented nationwide. So, it is not only the responsibility of the common people to question the policies which are irrelevant and needed some amendments. As we all know that no one in the world is perfect but everyone tries to make the perfectness by learning and changing, similarly the lawmakers and the law they make are not always perfect and questioning their policies will make it better to practically implement it.
In our country a law is passed which is motor vehicle act in which if person lacks any of the documents the vehicle because of any circumstances, they are forced to pay a very high amount of money as a penalty or they can even get to the jail if the police officer wants them to be behind the bar, giving such harsh punishment to the driver or to pose so much penalty which is higher than the vehicle itself is totally irrelevant for me and so for the other people. Hence, the state ministers themselves not accepted the law which is passed by the central government and lowers down the charges.
It is not always right to question the lawmakers because they are highly intellectual people and before any law to be practically implemented, it passes through various assemblies of cognoscenti people which are chosen by the people itself. So, whatever they are trying to do must be for the betterment of us which may be beneficial for us. Increasing the punishment drastically will force the people to wear a helmet and have a pollution card which is good for their safety and environment. Therefore, the questions should be raised but only if it is required and just for the sake of questioning.
The lawmakers try their best to make the country a better place and for that they sometimes impose a law that is difficult to be accepted by the society or what is thought by them that the law they made is beneficial but practically it is doing more harm than good, then people should oppose the law and do not accept it passively and if we do, we simply doing harm to ourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
...ooked up by the people choices and they tries their best to end it because the countr...
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Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... which are highly punishable if someone doesnt follow it. Therefore, people should que...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...sed which is motor vehicle act in which if person lacks any of the documents the v...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the country a better place and for that they sometimes impose a law that is diff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54979253112 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63088945912 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433609958506 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.393327311 60.3974514979 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.75 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1666666667 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21893154718 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101269428298 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111636102663 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132677411507 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714927759585 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.