You have received a letter from your university of Albion demanding a reason for your absence
from an exam. You were ill that day, but failed to submit the evidence. Write a letter to the
Examinations Committee explaining your situation. You should include:
– Apologies for the situation
– Identification for yourself (Name, Student Number, Case Number)
– An explanation of what had happened and any possible evidence you may have
– Possible resolutions to consider.
Respected Sir,
Based on letter which I got from my university . please accept my apology for my absence on my exams day.
my name is Musa. I am student of six semester studying BS electrical engineering. my registration number is SP09.my exams was planned on February 5, 2019. On this day I felt swear headache in the morning while I was about to come university . Immediately I went to hospital and admitted in Emergency ward. after 3 hours they released me from there and moved to X-ray room for my City scan . after complete all my tests they told cause of headache was empty stomach and advised me to take bed rest for 1 week.
please find attached my admission receipt along with my scan report . It is requested to allow me to appear again in exams next month badge
Appreciate your kind understanding and support .
Regards,you have received a letter from your university of Albion demanding a reason for your absence
from an exam. you were ill that day, but failed to submit the evidence. Write a letter to the
Examinations Committee explaining your situation. you should include:
– apologies for the situation
– Identification for yourself (name, student number, Case number)
– An explanation of what had happened and any possible evidence you may have
– possible resolutions to consider.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...on letter which I got from my university . please accept my apology for my absence...
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...gy for my absence on my exams day. my name is Musa. I am student of six semes...
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... my name is Musa. I am student of six semester studying BS electrical engineering. my ...
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...ter studying BS electrical engineering. my registration number is SP09.my exams wa...
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...ing while I was about to come university . Immediately I went to hospital and admi...
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...ospital and admitted in Emergency ward. after 3 hours they released me from there and...
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...and moved to X-ray room for my City scan . after complete all my tests they told c...
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...ed me to take bed rest for 1 week. please find attached my admission receipt alon...
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...ission receipt along with my scan report . It is requested to allow me to appear a...
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...ar again in exams next month badge Appreciate your kind understanding and s...
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...iate your kind understanding and support . Regards,you have rec...
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...nd any possible evidence you may have – possible resolutions to consider.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14414414414 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79005950965 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657657657658 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8107600153 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392102796917 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12826917218 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174279783874 0.0603063233224 289% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183778596077 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20709852548 0.0580467560999 357% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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