Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Increasing popularity of English is leading to reduction of use of several other languages. It is often believed that the situation of fewer languages will make the life of people smoother. I unconditionally agree with this notion as it brings various benefits for the people.
There are numerous reasons which support that reduction of languages will make the life of people comfortable. Firstly, this makes travelling easier as people need not to worry about language disparity while travelling anymore. Tourists need to interact with people of home nation while travelling to a new country. Difference in language creates various communication problems for them. For example, when I went to China for holidays, it was extremely difficult for me to interact with the local people due to difference in language. This had completely ruined my holidays. Had it been the same language in both the nations, it would have been a convenient situation for me. Therefore, I believe that fewer languages will definitely be beneficial for tourists.
Secondly, lesser languages will make migration of people smoother. Many people from developing nations migrate to a developed nation in pursuit of a better life. However, disparity in languages. reduces the options for people as they try to ignore the countries where people speak different language because It takes too much time for him to learn a new language. For instance, it is extremely difficult for a Korean national who does not know English to migrate to countries such as Australia and Canada. According to me, lesser languages will definitely promote the migration of people and open gates of new opportunities for people.
Finally, fewer languages will ease the burden of students. Today, there is huge burden on our youth as they have to study several languages along with complex subjects such as Mathematics and Science. This is increasing their stress and make their young life difficult. If we have lesser languages, then children need not to learn all these complex languages, which will ease the burden on them. Thus, I think that reduction in number of languages will make the life of children easier.
To conclude, lesser languages will make travel and migration of people comfortable along with several benefits to children. It is predicted that sooner the time will come when we have common language all around the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
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Suggestion: Reduces
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...countries such as Australia and Canada. According to me, lesser languages will definitely promo...
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Message: Did you mean 'learn'?
Suggestion: learn
...esser languages, then children need not to learn all these complex languages, which will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19896640827 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74500588735 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478036175711 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1293760212 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54166666667 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28899782236 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981543767393 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061302630167 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188034325187 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363332167139 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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