you would like to buy some electrical goods from a shop in a town far away from where you live. write a letter to the manager
1; say which electrical goods you want
2. ask questions on cost and how to pay
4. explain how you will collect the goods
no need for address, start the letter using Dear.....
Dear Sir/Ma,
I am writing to place an order for some items from your electrical store division. I am a regular customer, notwithstanding that I live far away from your city. I will need 2 gang switches, 4 units of blade switch, 6 LED bulbs and 1 change over. I hope you have all these items in stock?
Please kindly raise a proforma invoice for the listed items so that I can know the total cost. Also, I would expect that I will get the best prices for each of the items been that I am a very loyal customer. I will want to pay via a bank transfer as I already have your bank detail, or you can let me know if you prefer an alternative means of payment.
I would be grateful if the items are sent through courier; Faith Logistics runs a direct waybill delivery service to my town so that I can pick it up from them.
Thanks for your prompt action on this request
Yours faithfully
Benneth Emeka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng that I live far away from your city. I will need 2 gang switches, 4 units of b...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... switch, 6 LED bulbs and 1 change over. I hope you have all these items in stock?...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36416184971 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35416999004 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6279572108 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2089523695 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793907433601 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424636222629 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10946754121 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731768548764 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.