You need to do more physical exercise write a letter to your friend asking him to join youin your letter
why you want to do physical exercise
what type of physical exercise you are planning to do
why you want your friend to join you
Dear Maria,
Hope you're doing well. You 'll be glad to know that I have taken decision to do regular workout, and would like you to accompany me in doing so.
As you know, how hectic my regime is ? I 've to sit for long hours in front of screen at my workplace. Owing to this, I have started gaining weight as well as I feel immense weakness in my body.Thus,I 've been thinking to perform physical activities.
Actually, I have been recommended by my physician for jogging, an aerobic exercise, so I'll look forward to perform the same This would not only be useful in burning calories but will also help me to increase my fitness level.
Since you're fitness freak, your constant guidance and motivation would be helpful in boosting me to carry on jogging with enthusiasm. So, I heartily want you to come along with me, and we both together 'll jog in the park located in vicinity of my home.
See you soon.
Yours affectionately,
Sania
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Maria, Hope youre doing well. You ll be glad to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Maria, Hope youre doing well. You ll be glad to know that...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...l as I feel immense weakness in my body.Thus,I ve been thinking to perform physical ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... I feel immense weakness in my body.Thus,I ve been thinking to perform physical ac...
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Line 13, column 88, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...an for jogging, an aerobic exercise, so Ill look forward to perform the same This w...
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Line 13, column 105, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to performing'.
Suggestion: to performing
...n aerobic exercise, so Ill look forward to perform the same This would not only be useful ...
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Line 13, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...useful in burning calories but will also help me to increase my fitness level. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...o increase my fitness level. Since youre fitness freak, your constant guidance a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, so, thus, well, i feel, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67058823529 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57236831719 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.828285266 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222718136713 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10309116236 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724813699229 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126317516351 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954325466948 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.