In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?
Because of the development of technology, agriculture become more advanced than the pass. It seems human are no longer need to scared of starving, however it still has many people who go hungry around the world. This essay may discuss the reasons of this issue and how to solve it.
The first reason is that lots of countries tend to use those corns as industrial ingredients or export to other countries instead of selling them to people. Those corn are used to increase other products such as wine or alcohol which satisfied industry needed. Secondly, only developed countries know the methods of increasing corn production. And lots of developing nations are struggled in searching these method. Some countries do not know how to protect soil and with the soil become unfertilized, the corn decrease which cause more people live in hungry. Finally, the imperfect method produce fruit and vegetable with pesticides which are harmful toward human. Some production that produced with pesticides and fertilizer may cause damage to human’s health or even led to died. Obviously, those lethal corns are inappropriate to human being.
There are several solutions to this issue. Firstly, developed countries should give hands to developing countries. Sending agriculture professors or farm machines to help building intensive-agriculture could largely release soil pressure but increase production to those developing countries. Moreover, it is important to reduce the harmful pesticides and fertilizer using within farming.
Overall, I believe that if expand the advanced method in agriculture around the world and continued perfect methods in it can reduce the number of people who still live in hungry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
...ping nations are struggled in searching these method. Some countries do not know how to prot...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...ure professors or farm machines to help building intensive-agriculture could largely rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45692883895 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87882232963 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8778897856 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136968695688 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450961543966 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691152632912 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118760698997 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966400814568 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.