Educational Institute have the responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
this topic raises the controversial issue whether education system have give the rights to student to choose the particular subject in which they want to do mastery or students has to learn all the subjects. indisputably studying all the subjects are good because many students don't know in which subject they wanna to do mastery in the starting of the fields. nevertheless pursuing fields of study in which students likely to succeed is better because if student don't want to study any other subjects then money and time will be wasted. i totally agree with the author that students have to rights to choose any particular fields in which they wanna to do mastery.
for example if any students wants to study any particular subject but our educational system doesn't provide this feasibility then student has to learn all the subjects without having interest and during this time if student learn only particular subjects then they will succeed in particular field in the time of learning all the subjects.
now for example if student has to compulsory follow our education system then they has to paid for all the subjects and along with this they waste their important time in learning other subjects. thus, if they choose particular subjects then money will be saved and most importantly time will be saved and they also get success over this particular field.
our current education system is also good for that students they don't know which field or which subject they has to choose or in which subject they want to further to get success for this type of student it is better to study all the subject and get the knowledge of all subjects and then choose particular subject. and we all know that our society believes in all rounder students thus, because of our current educational system students will achieve the all rounder tag. and they can do work in any field.
in conclusion although our current education system is good educational system has to give rights to student to choose the particular field so they will their money and time both use this money and time in the getting of success of this field. thus, educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95595854922 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47996211387 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.329015544041 0.4932671777 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2711153083 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.416666667 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1666666667 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384465882572 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219424232202 0.0831039109588 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222554190521 0.0758088955206 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270267118706 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146550381557 0.0667264976115 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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