People are surrounded by advertising and there is an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think positive effects outweigh the negative effects?
With the development of mass media, we are bombarded with all kinds of advertisement on a daily basis. In my opinion, although advertisements have some benefits, its drawbacks are more obvious if not reasonably regulated.
It is undeniable that advertisement plays some positive roles in modern commercial society. To begin with, advertising offers people some useful information about products, which is convenient for those potential consumers to know the price and function about those items they want to buy. Furthermore, some of them are well-designed with ingenious creativity and wonderful visual effects which spices up our daily life and entertain us a lot. Besides, the public service advertisements, in particular, can also raise the public’s awareness of some social problems, such as environmental protection and caring for some diseases, etc.
However, those deficiencies of advertisements cannot be neglected. The main drawback of most advertising is that it always exaggerates the merits of products while downplaying their disadvantages. Some of them even make false publicities, which exert adverse impact on consumers. Particularly, those commercial aimed at children often introduce some toys and snacks, which are prone to result in children distraction or diseases such as obesity. In addition, in recent years, advertisements are excessive, which lead to annoying among the society. Some of them are just brainwashing and their only effect is to spoil people’s emotional feeling, which should be strictly regulated.
In conclusion, advertisements indeed offer some convenience and entertainment to our daily life, but their negative effects outweigh those benefits in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79607843137 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30661960007 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4101750617 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155278146676 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579584435441 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061805641653 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113641332999 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692351525548 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.