Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
• suggest the places they can visit
• recommend a place where they can stay
• offer something you can do with them.
Dear Priya,
Hope you are doing fine. Happy to know that your parents are visiting Mumbai for 3 days in January.
There are quite a few well-known tourist spots that uncle and aunty can visit. However, I will recommend very few well-known places to visit as they are in Mumbai for short period. The first place that they must visit is Gateway of India, an architect marvel built by British in 1930. This place was built near the sea as the British use to dock all their ships. Another well know place that they can visit is Juhu beach, awarded the title of cleanest beach by the Indian government. There are restaurant on this beach which serves authentic Indian style sea food. I am sure your parents will relish the food.
I will be town during uncle and aunty visit, hence I will be happy to take them out for shopping in Colaba causeway which is famous for antiques. Aunty can buy antique china for kitchen, show pieces and even jewellery.
In your letter you have also ask for my recommendation for their hotel stay which should be economical as well as comfortable. I would like to recommend a new hotel will was inaugurated couple of weeks back. I have heard decent review from my friends.
Do let me know if you need any more details. Also, please share their flight details, I will be happy to receive them at the airport.
Lots of Love
Mona
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e was built near the sea as the British use to dock all their ships. Another well k...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the cleanest'.
Suggestion: of the cleanest
... visit is Juhu beach, awarded the title of cleanest beach by the Indian government. There a...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: restaurants
...ach by the Indian government. There are restaurant on this beach which serves authentic In...
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Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'asked'.
Suggestion: asked
...ellery. In your letter you have also ask for my recommendation for their hotel s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57723577236 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22261092839 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9776059069 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2352941176 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2794877981 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801532144745 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664348754941 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142604519298 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745020179736 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.