" Prevention is better than cure ". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be Bette to invest in preventive measures . To what extent do you agree .
Today medical research band treatment is so costly that often people strongly suggest that we should prevent these diseases from occurring instead of treating them after happening . Up to certain extent ni agree with the above view but also think that we should continue our medical research to tackle some new disease that have ni treatments yet.
To begin with , it is not at all possible to prevent all diseases . It would be always beneficial to do some research so that we can at least have some valid method and treatment for each and every illness . one best example of this is recently happened Ebola outbreak in Africa . If we had proper research and treatment of this disease then we could save thousands of lives . So we should invest our time and money in the medical research and treatments to tackles such life threatening illness.
On the other hand , we should also take necessary steps to prevent these diseases . we all know that , today medical treatment coat is so high that even middle class person cannot afford it . By proper systematic , and well defined plan , now India , China and most of the countries of world become polio free .
In conclusion , medical research on diseases and preventing them to occur , both have equal importance and we should equally focus on both areas to make our lives healthier , livable and enjoyable .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, as to, at least, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92139737991 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44429824538 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0959156653 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.454545455 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182828020679 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730441913076 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479673813032 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114530802103 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419561020275 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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