Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Now is the age of information and sharing them. The whole world is connected and we are the citizens of a global village. So sharing information is important for us all to develop to a better future. However, when it is sharing information freely we are concerned about, it all comes down to the nature of the information being shared.
Information in general should not be kept in secret. For example, there are a lot of scientific research going on all over the world whose purposes are developing our understanding of the world and inventions that lead to development. Freely sharing these kinds of information may lead to acceleration and collaboration among researchers. This can be extremely helpful to the society and its’ inhabitants. Sharing knowledge of academic world also serves the same purpose. Business is the driving force of the whole world. Almost everything comes down to business. So sharing business information can lead to global development , which in turn can contribute in various useful ways. For example, entrepreneurship nowadays is a major factor in business. If successful entrepreneurs of the world share their strategies and motivations, people who are starting this can be highly benefitted. This will help to reduce the amount of unemployment all over the world.
While sharing information has its’ great benefits, sometimes it is best to keep them secret. For example, nuclear technology is a marvel of modern science and engineering. Sharing this kind of information can be dangerous considering there are people who can use it for the purpose of destruction. Government policies in some matters should also be kept secret, otherwise they may create chaos, that can cause the entire system to collapse. Security systems also should not be shared because that may also lead to drastic effects.
Therefore, we need to be careful while sharing information. Benefits and impacts should be carefully assessed before sharing information, because without that the world may face threatening situations.
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- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chartshows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how peoplethink the costs of adult education should be shared. 56
- chinese urban expenditure 78
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. 78
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 56
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... modern science and engineering. Sharing this kind of information can be dangerou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32716049383 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.046626226 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.258533883 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77272727273 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288397111781 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896432960015 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054103695665 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183572704973 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046275225587 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.