If racism and xenophobia are attitude that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved.Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
It is believed that the issues derive from racism and xenophobia can be resolved as these are built by human, not born with. I totally agree with this view because of two main reasons.
Firstly, education is the main factor leading to racism and xenophobia. This means when people still a child, nobody taught to them about the difference between countries, so if they see a foreigner, they will incline to have an aversion to them. For example, in Vietnam there are some differences between the two regions North and South such as the way of thinking and manners, southerners they dislike that northern people have to invite every meal. This problem will lead to the increasing rate of violence at school, possibly university where there are many students from different regions. Therefore, to reduce that, people should let their children learn about different regions, about people in different countries, so that when they bring up they will not lead to become racists and xenophobia.
Secondly, environment is also considered as another major cause of racism and xenophobia. This includes the living and working environment. For instance, if friends and colleagues often look down on people from a particular region of the country, Thanh Hoa as an example, one would probably be acquired the same mindset. A solution to this is the government and educational institutions to organize and ease long-term campaigns to raise people’s awareness of this issue.
To conclude, there are ample evidences suggesting that problems created by man, more specifically issues pertain to racism are issues with solutions. It is predicted that if problems related racism and xenophobia are resolved, world would become a better place to live in foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22535211268 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74020590958 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8594768999 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230208064105 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850381490955 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601608893914 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155181504593 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732948385727 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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