The crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.
Why do you think that is?
What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
Nowadays in many countries crime has become a menace and is growing like a never-ending situation. Urban areas are experiencing a comparatively higher rate of crime than rural areas in most of the countries. The main reason for high-rise crime in urban areas as compared to rural areas is poverty and excessive unemployment. Governments of such countries must take necessary steps to reduce this to negative by recruiting more police officers and it can also be mend by increasing the capacity of CCTV cameras in high crime areas of a particular city.
To begin with, poverty is a big barrier for any nation to develop and is the main cause behind these incessant crimes. Most of the people below the poverty line indulge themselves in unlawful activities like pilferage, theft, and trespassing to fulfill their daily necessities. For example, In India, widespread gold chain and purse snatching have created a fear among women to come out on roads alone. Whereas unemployment is another main cause behind rising crime as people without jobs inculcate themselves in illegal acts out of frustration of not getting any job. For example, the City of Delhi noticed the highest rate of unemployment in march 2019 and at the same time, a survey of theft complaints showed numerous increase.
There are countless solutions to tackle this alarming situation. The main solution is increasing the staff of police officials which will help in increasing more surveillance in high crime areas. For e.g. Peel region of the greater Toronto area has one police officer over every 100 citizens which is not bad planning. On the other hand Governments of high crime nations must initiate necessary steps to overcome this fear of crime and its outcomes. The high tendency of CCTV footage cameras should be installed in areas experiencing huge rate of illegal acts and these cameras will help cops to nab the accused in short intervals of time. For E.g. Delhi chief minister installed 250000 CCTV night surveillance cameras all across the city which has helped a lot in reducing crime on busy roads of the capital city.
In conclusion, I reckon that crime needs to be cured from grassroots level arising out of poverty and massive unemployment. However, Respective Governments should take proper and genuine steps to overcome these fearful circumstances and provide citizens with good and lawful environment to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
Nowadays in many countries crime has become a menace and is growin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., however, so, whereas, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, in short, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13197969543 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7430396057 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6045716134 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.941176471 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25505614269 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844213936455 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113800694116 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152025117632 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125765954892 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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