The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where necessary
The graph illustrates the day-to-day water consumption for Americans in their homes. The legends highlight the usage of water with and without conservation methods.
Overall,it is immediately apparent from the bar graph that maximum water is consumed in the flushing a toilet and least in the washing dishes.
To begin,interestingly,the water consumed in taking shower(13 gallons) and washing clothes (15 gallons) shows a fairly similar pattern,when water is used with and without conservative method. Both the cases are almost similar. The minimal water is used in washing dishes and in other uses and in both the cases not more then 2 gallons of water is used by either of the method. Interestingly,the noticeable pattern of using Faucets reflects that the daily usage of water by either of the method makes up 10 gallons.
Moving further,largest amount of water is used in flushing a toilet when conservative method is not in use and in contrary,when used shows a drastic difference of about 10 gallons. Moreover,leaks are more likely to be happen when conservative method is not used and if the conservative method is used about 5 gallons of water could be saved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... without conservation methods. Overall,it is immediately apparent from the bar gr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , interestingly
... least in the washing dishes. To begin,interestingly,the water consumed in taking shower13 g...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...5 gallons shows a fairly similar pattern,when water is used with and without conserva...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...her uses and in both the cases not more then 2 gallons of water is used by either of...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...d by either of the method. Interestingly,the noticeable pattern of using Faucets ref...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , largest
...od makes up 10 gallons. Moving further,largest amount of water is used in flushing a t...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the largest'.
Suggestion: , the largest
...od makes up 10 gallons. Moving further,largest amount of water is used in flushing a t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...ive method is not in use and in contrary,when used shows a drastic difference of abou...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , leaks
...difference of about 10 gallons. Moreover,leaks are more likely to be happen when conse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15706806283 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25996016223 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486910994764 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4194634878 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132086330734 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696203826263 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668546338444 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987933030011 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638738295186 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.