Some say that music as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree give your opinion.
In present, more and more subjects add to the school education system in world -wide such as science, Mathematics, literature and languages but it’s dividing in to two parts as core subjects and elective subjects. Thus, students can be selected any esthetic subject such as music, dancing and art. Most of education specialists thought about music are more important to student’s life as same as other subjects. This essay will discuss why music will valuable for children life and what are the benefits for adding this subject to education system.
In this digital world, most of children structured to exam basis education system nevertheless, they haven’t time to feel the world and humanity. On the other hand they are running with competitive and changing society whether that’s the reason of why music or esthetic subjects are including as a subject. As result of this, mot of children can be released their stress, problems and they can be assure their hidden talent and own creativity.
On today, most of violence and crimes increase day by day whilst most of children can’t manage their lifestyle without mobile phone and lap top. However they have inactive and sedentary life style with busy parents. On the other hand, their behaviors, creativity and humanity were slowly decreasing than past because they don’t know how to enjoy their life without technology. Thus, music can be change more things such as personality and creativity.
Most of people think music as valuable as other subjects in school learning system. In my opinion, schools have responsibility to create a person with educated and humanitarian thus, they need to improve their skill with rhythmic nevertheless in the future they will be bearing a person with non -humanity.
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25783972125 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73248051349 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3846765317 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18005346998 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772969596022 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590110650968 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117393708395 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395812087961 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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