It is believed that universities should enroll men and women in equal numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, man was the protector and decision maker in the home. Women were limited to domestic matters such as looking after the home and raising children. Further, they had lower literacy level due to limited education and also limited freedom. Moreover they did not travel independently whilst they haven't had freedom to make their own decisions. It was purely a male dominated era. On the other hand women in the past were not affected by globalization and cultural influence.
Dramatically, in this rapidly evolving era with the advancement of education, knowledge, business, communication, science and technology standards were rapidly increased and continue to change. Moreover, both men and women having same educational qualification which will leading to have equal employment opportunities. However society's outlook towards women has now changed. Presently, women have reached equal or greater hights than men specially, in the developing and developed countries whilst they are able to make their own decisions without pressure by male. Women in massive countries now have even entered in to dangerous and heroic professions.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 1207.87684729 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 242.827586207 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54285714286 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93134502805 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691428571429 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7633629781 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977449234374 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350801848753 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370738821037 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729786606963 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425593402321 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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