You would like to attend a training course. Write a letter to your company manager and say.
Why would you like to attend this course?
Why would it be beneficial for you and the company?
suggest how to arrange time for it?
Dear Sir,
My name is Valli, and I have worked as an automation tester under Airline project for the past seven years. I am writing to request you for a training course about Selenium automation tool, which is an emerging cutting-edge technology, that helps us to deliver our project more efficiently.
To elaborate further, this course offers profound knowledge of using selenium framework. In addition, our application will be tested in a better way and defect management become easier. As a result, it ensures on time delivery which more likely increase customer satisfaction index.
Furthermore, we are working on Eastern standard time, so probably our work starts after post-lunch. Besides, it is good to utilise the morning hours for our session. It would be highly beneficial if you arrange a two-hour sessions for a week. Moreover, it would be completed within a week if we follow this schedule.
Kindly please be considerate about my request and I am looking forward to hear it from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Valli
- You need to seek admission in a short course. write a letter to the admission officer.In your letter, you should:what the course ishow your background knowledge is related to thiswhy this institute is important. 78
- Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care for them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. 73
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as the deterrent, many people believe that the other measures will be needed. Discuss both views? 78
- some people prefer to live in hot climates whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with a cold climate Discuss both the view and give your opinion 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'session'?
Suggestion: session
...ly beneficial if you arrange a two-hour sessions for a week. Moreover, it would be compl...
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Line 17, column 72, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...out my request and I am looking forward to hear it from you. Yours Sincerely, ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31547619048 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84690626531 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0110548596 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1818181818 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255467237191 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866476864181 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077932789249 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125628724095 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050290994913 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.