Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

it is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries while domestic films do not have customers, who pay money to them. there are several reasons why this case is true. I personally believe that governments should give financial support to local film industry in order to make films which could compete with overseas sample.

there are many reasons why foreign films are more popular rather than films which have been made by local film makers. In my opinion, the primary reason for this case is that foreign films have a high quality, which cause that local films can not compete with those. To create a high-quality film, directors need a huge budget. The pioneer company in this industry access to big financial source. As a result, they can hire professional film crew, including creative author, famous actors and actress, and others who can work together in relative harmony and make a high-quality film. For example, Titanic, which is a successful film with a big-budget, could set a record of sale in the world at its period.

In my opinion, governments should promote local film industry via financial helping which cover parts of those costs. there are many reasons why it should be done, but I prefer to argue about its financial profits. First, if local film industry promote, many people could work in this section. so, the level of unemployment will be reduced. A high-quality film could attract overseas film-lover, so new revenue will be made from export film. Also, a film could help to tourism industry via introduction of local tradition and attractive location to foreign people.

In conclusion, I think that promoting local film industry need to financial support which should be given by governments.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11724137931 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56352351155 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4780781745 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.544354225167 0.244688304435 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195596281213 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111245228973 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371137780143 0.151304729494 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647668274691 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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