If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Almost, every person has goals in their life. Some of them may have very high goals. It is obvious that to achieve high goals, the person should sacrifice (if necessary) their secondary goals in order to complete it with primary focus. Although, for achieving a goal, it should not come at the cost of principles or ethics.
Every person have their own dream of achieving a goal. Many of them are ready to take strict steps in their life inorder to full-fill their only dream. For example, a former Indian crickter Captain Mahendra Singh Dhoni have struggle all his life to get selected in Cricket Team. No doubt he is one of the best Inidan crickter captain, the world will ever see. He has some extraordinary mindset and skills in cricket, but than also he struggle so hard in his life to get selected in the Indian team. One of the most important decision in his life was to leave his current job and then make all of his focus and effort in cricket, although his financial condition was not stable. After all those sacrifice, he is one of the well reputated cricketer the world will ever see.
It is true that achieving a goal is very important for someone. But it is also true that to achieve a certain goal, you should take care of reputation, ethics and beliefs. One should always see the consequences of the results. If your success results in creating some kind of problem for someone or damaging environment, than you should reconsider your steps. For example, if one of the scientist come up with the unique invention of container and bags of some very harmful material inorder to replace plastic because these container and plastics are ver cheap and would be beneficial for every humans. But not to forget that it contains harmful material which is very egregious for the environment. So, scientist should reconsider the goal of making such inventions that could damage the environment badly.
To sum up, goal should be achieved by your hard work and passion, but not at the cost of other principles that would lead to some egregious effect on the environment or humans. </span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
...ckter Captain Mahendra Singh Dhoni have struggle all his life to get selected in Cricket...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'struggles'.
Suggestion: struggles
...and skills in cricket, but than also he struggle so hard in his life to get selected in ...
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Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...em for someone or damaging environment, than you should reconsider your steps. For e...
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Line 9, column 519, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this container' or 'these containers'?
Suggestion: this container; these containers
...rial inorder to replace plastic because these container and plastics are ver cheap and would be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, then, well, after all, as to, for example, kind of, no doubt, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83197831978 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76364837971 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50406504065 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9874764933 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8421052632 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.065362580929 0.243740707755 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249254596111 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276226517708 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044694567056 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160057941673 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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